Light_Devil

(Uhhh, Maki-chan, I'd appreciate if you didn't control my character to so much; he's not that cruel and unappreciative.) ARGHH! This is on wrong one . . . sorry. ^^

I think Seeminglymeaningless has a point, I don't think anybody would ever even talk to someone who had that much rumours floating around them. Let alone meet with them and ...

This is interesting, nothing grammatically wrong with it or spelling wise. I feel sympathetic for the main character and I want to know more about Bo. I have a feeling ...

OMG! I can't believe no one has even replied! This story is amazing! It is pyshicologically intriguing! I'm hooked to it! Amazing! There are little teeny mistake sthat I could ...

Okay, well. I am at a complete loss. Utterly amazingly lost. What reason has the adopted son have for killing his parents? And family? The relationship between them doesn't make ...

Squall has a point. This piece is well-written, but there wasn't any real point in this short story. There really isn't anything to say. It was a simple thing to ...

This is a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed it. I love it how the character took the leap at the end. Nothing grammatically wrong to point out, as the ...

I think I'll take that as a compliment. ^^. This was compiled by me because sometimes my mind wanders, and there is a plot in it; though if you don't ...

Ballow Ballow smiled and replied with a dry note in his voice, "Us demons are an untrustworthy lot and people really don't tend to tell us a lot." Shade looked ...

Ballow Ballow's tale twitched and so did his ears. Nothign wa shappening they were just standing there. It was an awkward silence which he broke, "Uhh, are we going any ...

Okay since I'm not even in this yet I'll talk to you Sylverdawn ^^ Ballow Ballow grinned as he walked into the mess hall. Trainees converged around him and he ...

Ballow I stared at them. They looked as if they were expecting an apology. Well, they weren't going to get one. I began, "Where are you going?" They didn't answer. ...

[quote="Leapy"] [quote] Thank you for the review and I'll take that into accout. I'll maybe spell check it now and I'll edit it. Smoother, is better. ^^

[quote="olivia1987uk"][/quote] Well, it actually IS part of the story. But you can take it anyway I suppose ^^. Thank you for reading this. And thank you for the comment.

For some reason lately I've been wanting to cry. The tears just seem to pop up when I'm not thinking and I look around sharply to see if anyone saw. ...