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Tim (Sorry, I'm going to post a little bit ahead.) Tim glanced over to the Captain, "The numbers are slowly going down." It was a statement not a question and ...

Hmmm, I think myfreindsavamp said we could start. I think we can? If we can here I go. Ballow Ballow turned to Izzekiel and raised an eyebrow, "You heard about ...

Name: Ballow Linx (He never tells anyone his last name though.) Age: 17 Gender: Male Personality: Bubbly, loves a good argument, quirky and has a weird sense of intelligent humour. ...

(Geh, how can you tell what their element is? Is it like written upon their bodies? And last time I checked we were in a cafe . . . Oh ...

Ballow Ballow watched as Alstruck walked towards them with a smile. Ballow put a hand up for a hi-five and Alstruck hi-fived him. Ballow smiled - they had been good ...

Okay, this will be where you can ask me questions about everything in the plot. ^^

*sighs, then begins to cry* I wish I could write like this. This story just absorbed my total attention from start to finish. Amazing, really - fascinating and totally wonderful. ...

OMG! Wow, this is a wonderful story and I really would like to read the rest. There's nothing grammatically wrong correct to fix up and I think it's mostly fine ...

“Cassidy, I know you’re not happy about this but think of the possibility." The only tihng I could find wrong in this whole entire piece - you forgot a comma ...

All characters have awake in a mysterious forest and a piece of paper rest one the floor in front of their bodies. On it is written, "Good morning. I see ...

Wow, this story is amazing. There are grammar mistakes which I can poke at and no typos either. This an interesting piece and I ind myslef wanting to know more ...

Okay, before I even read this I have to tell you to fix up you use of entering - its abominable and deterring to readers and reviewers. The book I ...

I love where this is going. I don't know where the fan-fic of this is going to be tied in, but by all means this really doesn't need it! I ...

The moment that would change Daniel Clarkson's life forever occurred one cold morning on December the 27th. For the past eight years of his fifteen year long life, he had ...

Lol. This really isn't poetry, but it was fun to read. I chose the 1st one. *laughs* Yes, I am evil. Have A Nice Day. Azrael.