Light_Devil

Interesting. I like this, but . . . There are a few grammar, tense and spelling mistakes. I am interested as to where this is going, but I imagine that ...

Chapter 2 The boats drifted down the river caught on a strong current. Men in heavy and obviously awkward armour, judging by the way they all sat, spotted them and ...

Personally, I think this is short and sweet. Ahhh, but you said to be harsh so . . . I have a few things to point out. I'm going to ...

The glass was so cold; water droplets ran down it creating patterns that weaved together in intricate designs. Blythe’s thumb ran along the side of the glass, creating the squealing ...

Thank you for the review, but, what bad language? I don't understand what you're talking about. I read over it and I didn't see any. Oh, well, thanks anyway. I'll ...

Ahh, thanks for those reviews. I'm happy with what you guys pointed out, as I wouldn't normally have found these things myself. I usually just blank out the things I ...

It growled. I stared at the animal trap on the ground and fervently hoped that a strong animal rest inside. Maybe I could bind a grizzly bear to my soul, ...

*Unsure what you mean by group . . . ^^" I'll post it here and if someone tells me what you mean I'll add it there as well ^^"* Arrow ...

Arrow Her tempting made me want it all the more and I darted forward by quickly slid a part of my shirt in between our lips. I let out a ...

Arrow Arrow smiled, watching her as the convulsions slowed and her strength slowly came back, her hand immediately reached over to the staff and she clutched it tightly to herself. ...

Arrow He stared at her, contemplating her cheeriness. The thought of eating her drifted across his mind momentarily, but he dismissed it. His sister wouldn't have been happy with him ...

Arrow Arrow stared at the footprints in the sand. He'd been pointlessly following them in hope of maybe some shelter or water. Or perhaps to even eat the person who ...

Arrow The little girl looked shocked as the book turned to gold in her hands. I laughed, enjoying the forever pain I was hurting from, then I dived for the ...

I claims a spot! ^^

Congrats, Evi. Have A Nice Day. Azrael.