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Re: Protector:Chapter One
Chapter One: A Stroll Through The Forest I quietly put up my cloak, feeling the soft cloth. Night didn’t make the forest any more bearable, and what's more it was ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
C hapter Four: The Chase I leaped down the stairs I kept thinking why was this spy here; there was nothing in this kingdom for him. I reached the bottom ...
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Re: The Protecter
I tried to explain in the second chapter. Guess I didn't do a good job. Sorry.
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Can you review the first two chapters of The Protector it's in sub form Action/Adventure. Thanks.
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
I edited Chapter One.
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
I hope that clears things up.
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
Chapter Two: An Errand I cleaned myself up and headed towards my destination, which was the kingdom Morgalath. My king sent me to Morgalath because the king of Morgalth requested ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
Thanks for the tips.
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: The Protecter
Chapter One: A Stroll Through The Forest I quietly put up my cloak, feeling the soft cloth. Night didn’t make the forest any more bearable, and what's more it was ...
Aug 2, 2010