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Re: She Knows Him
I really enjoyed reading this, I liked they way you describe the girl as knowing small details of the boy, that shows how much she likes him without saying it.
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello, Im new on here and want to start writing often on here. I enjoy writing and hope that writing on here can really help me improve :D
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1
I really enjoyed reading this, I liked how you show the dream and the boy's goal and then show the reality of who he is now, I also enjoyed how ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: The Pharoahs Friends
Scarab beetles and scorpions coexist along side each other, to scrounge the morsles of food they can find in the dark, barren, tomb. They cover every inch of the floor ...
May 14, 2011
