Liavel

I'm a Romance writer myself and I liked how you played this out. It's true that a lot of Romance topics in this section or on other cites forget what ...

Thanks for the critique. I will definitely remember to space between paragraphs next time. As for my story this was kind of in the middle. I have the entire beginning ...

This is ok for a short piece. I kind of felt overwhelmed by all your descriptions on how beautiful this place and people are. If this is supposed to be ...

Well I still liked this next chapter but I don't think that it was as well written as the first part. There are some grammar errors and spelling that you ...

I also thought that this was pretty good. I don't know if I'm getting into something that had more in the beginning but from what I have read your ease ...

James sat up quickly. He had been having a nightmare. Bethany laid next to him her arm still around his neck. James slid her arm away and looked down at ...

As everyone else has said this piece is really well written. You are a good short story writer. I find most writers have a lot of trouble with short stories ...

Well first off I understand the trouble you might have with finding a title for your work. My titles usually don't come to me until I'm half way through a ...

I thought this was pretty good for your first time. I understand how it feels when you first start out. This is a little short to be a chapter, but ...

I agree with the previous post on this poem. I liked the way this piece flowed together for the most part. There were some points I wasn't too clear on. ...

Hello, My name is Dee-von. Although my author name is Liavel. I have been writing since I was about seven and its been my life ever since. There is really ...