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Thank you so much! I am in a non-fiction class right now and I love it... It's so much easier to get deep with things that are true. I really ...

Thank you so much! Very helpful comments. I definitely tried to take your advice into consideration... one more question, how does everyone feel about the repetitive terms "dry, dry" and ...

I re-edited this...

Yes, I am a Junior in college now, but this is all based on a true event. My friend passed away when I was 16. Thank you very much for ...

Thanks! That means so much!

Thanks for the comments and suggestions. = )

Thank you so much! Your criticism was much appreciated & I've already altered a few things. I have not written much since entering college, but I'm trying to get back ...

Note: I am re-writing a story I had previously posted. This is only the very beginning. It will cover all four years of high school.

Oh, and this definitely won't advocate drugs or anything like that. It will just talk about the ups and downs of all the "big stuff" that happened when I was ...

This was a very different attempt for me... kind-of modeled after the style Chbosky uses in The Perks of Being a Wallflower... rip it to shreds if you'd like. My ...

Thank you SO much everyone! I will make changes and post more ASAP.. but I have finals this upcoming week.. So who knows?

TIMJIM: I apologize for not being specific but this (if continued) would turn into a much longer peice. Brooke is a teenage Mom. Suzanne is her slightly younger sister. Their ...

Thanks! I honestly felt a lot better about this last night. Today... not so much. I see what you're saying about the one part being out of place. AND about ...

Oh thank you so much! You made my week.

Haha, thank you so much but this is actually a very old poem. I think I've gotten at least a little better since then. = )