Lexi

That is brilliant!!! Can't wait for the next bit (there will be one though, right?) The line "...and what sounded like tears" is fine, but that's probably my inner poet ...

The clouds were shifty on the day we left; they were twisting and diving, forming pictures that charged and sieged before dashing themselves against the silloettes of the mountains etched ...

i wrote this one while siting by a REALLY busy road at about 7:30, when the sun was going down, all of the rooftops i could see were painted golden ...

This is such a strong poem! a few tweaks would be; "You build me up To tear me down You spread your smile Like a stupid clown." I am, rather ...

As if you wrote this in ten minutes, it's awsome!! Just a few little tweaks... "Let me take your hands And free you from all demands Let me take your ...

this is and interesting poem, great theme, but you managed to write the whole thing without it sounding like something out of the bible! Skill... *Sighs, then stares out of ...

this is so cool! i love how you managed to keep the rhyme as well as the rythym going through the whole thing. That is skill! Keep writing. (Can't wait ...

Biffle1 wrote "Feet meet feet where hearts met pavement. Tears meet cheeks where lips kissed softly. Pen meets paper where memories met freedom. Black on black where church hymns play. ...

I voted Werewolf but if there was more of a choice i would DEFINATLY pick a Timelord. BTW i'm new, so...HI!!!!!!!!!!

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Hiya too! Yeah, i used to have a horse, but the adjistment place that we kept him in closed down so we had to sell now i just ride my ...

Don't mean to push you or anything, but can you PLEASE write more on this story, it is so well written and heartfelt and makes the romantic short story i'm ...

This poem is a bit weird, but i was sitting in our new car by a REALLY busy road at sunset, the sun was flowing over all the rooftops around ...

Hi everyone!!! Just felt like saying that. I can hardly move at the moment coz i had soccer training last night and then went for a HUGE run this morning. ...

BTW, the title is really good! but you could change it to "Battles Sealed by Walls/Doors", or "Wars Beneath the Ceiling". They're still pretty lame, sorry for ruining the flow ...