Levan

Thanks a lot guys on the grammar corrections, I'm working on the editing right now. Also, thanks a lot AnnaMamaLama and PhoenixBishop for the relationship and character tips. I'll make ...

This is my first non-fanfiction I'm currently working on. I've never delved with original characters before or even introduce them at the least on a story, and I'm just hoping ...

Ha! Levan here again... Hope you're not angry with me with the previous review. D: Now, like from before, another review. I've some improvement thus far, and I'm glad to ...

I like it too!! 8/10 Looks like the sort of character from a movie I'd watch and he from like GI Joe or something? He's a character from the Resident ...

You say Evi, I think Evil.

Hey Addawen19! Here's a review for your story. First off, the errors. There's a number of punctuation and capitalization errors, but I don't believe that's a biggie, but still, I ...

Yes! Gonna go for the Chainsaw man in Resident Evil 5. If only I could get a breath-through, bloodied sack-mask of pure menace. TUBM lives somewhere in Europe.

8/10. Really clever.

7/10. I like the odd expression on his face!

You say Gigi I think Vivi (from FF9).

God, I'd literally scream(even if I was a guy) if I'd witness something like that. Even more if it was my fault. :( Glad the baby made it out with ...

You say dinosaur I think King Kong.

No and no. I don't like jack-o-lanters. :( TUBM like Resident Evil. *crosses fingers*

Hmm... Black hair, brown eyes, I'm guessing a bit tall... That's what I could only think off. =/

I love writing in third person, as it gives you a wider opportunity in adding scenes and etc that does not include the main character. Honestly, first person turns me ...