Letty467

About the Capitalisation, that's just habit :oops: . I generally Write in Capitals because it becomes easier to read, eve though I know you should only use them for Nouns, ...

Kamas has pretty much pointed out everything I was going to say XD It is a good poem, it has some quite immature rhyming but that can be easily fix. ...

Soft and original. it's interesting how you made the first and last line in each stanza rhyme but the syllabols dont flow. to make a successfull rhyme you must indicate ...

I can't help but feel as if you need to work more on the emphasis of the syllables. take note: ma ry had a lit tle lamb (7) it's fleece ...

My merry, amusing sentences, bring you emotional Gold. These very abusing sentences, that won't release their hold. I feel like I am choking, on a thin laced noose. Painting over ...

I completely agreed with what Galerius stated. You repeated several words which could easily be changed to keep the reader reading. Instead of Light/alight/lit write Illume/Relume etc. Keep going, bec

It's good in a imaginative way, but I can't help but feel there's no poetry in this poem... if you can understand what I mean... What I mean by that ...