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Re: Eternal Eclipse
'Ello there. The name's Angel ^_^ First off, I must say, that even though English is your second language I wouldn't have thought otherwise if you didn't say. I'm not ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Eternal Eclipse
Interesting title. The story was a bit dull, maybe if you didn't sound so repetitive... Anyways this could be an interesting story but it needs some polishing up. Hopefully though ...
Oct 15, 2008
