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LesterB

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Guardian Angel

    Loved the imagery, though I felt I've heard it before, a lot of poems seem to want to use certain extremes in nature as metaphors for hardship and inspiration but ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Start of something, no name yet, or plot for that matter

    I enjoyed it a lot. All the paragraphs had clear and concise thoughts and there were no major spelling or grammar errors outside of what Danny has already mentioned. If ...

    Jun 17, 2009


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge