LesterB

First 2 pages of a short story I wrote not too long ago. Say what you like, all criticism welcome. I lick my bottom lip and taste blood and strawberries. ...

Loved the imagery, though I felt I've heard it before, a lot of poems seem to want to use certain extremes in nature as metaphors for hardship and inspiration but ...

I enjoyed it a lot. All the paragraphs had clear and concise thoughts and there were no major spelling or grammar errors outside of what Danny has already mentioned. If ...