LeslieH

Writers block, got to love it. This poem really caputred my attention with its title because the first thing I think of when I read or hear "white room" is ...

your anger definitely comes through in this the chorus is great, but maybe only put " i only want to be the strongest sentinel, i only want to be the ...

Black hawks waiting, searching for their prey, black haunting songs sung, not fearing the day These two lines are stron on their own, but they don't relate together. The repition ...