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Thank you very much, Shia. I appreciate the constructive criticism and I'll definitely learn from it!

Well, hello there! In your poem I sense feelings of inadequacy created by societal beauty standards. Your expression of this is pretty cool!

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That left me salivating for more! The consistent use of alliteration surely is a cause for celebration. And give me a recipe for how you managed to include the fundamentals ...

That left me salivating for more! The consistent use of alliteration surely is a cause for celebration. And give me a recipe for how you managed to include the fundamentals ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my work. This is one of my older poems and I had forgotten the whole writing processes and everything associated with its creation but ...

I feel as though you're trying to comfort yourself in the darkness of loneliness. It's almost as if you're taking strength in it. In a world were people live for ...