Leoni

Hi Clo. Thank you very much for taking a look at it, I know it's quite long. But thank you, I appreciate it :D 'Fug' in the top line isnt ...

Thanks Stella! You're right, description is missing. Hmmm....I will go back and put some when I go back to me. You know what, I had no idea you could do ...

Next bit guys! Chapter 1, Part 1 By nature, the Jaila were used to the tough environment of their home valley. Nestled awkwardly between the two kingdoms of Katoric and ...

Haha I know what you mean, I dont like it myself when people say 'tell us more, tell us more!' when you're waiting to tell them it later. But it's ...

Thanks for all the reviews so far guys! This is the next bit, chapter 1 but not all of it yet. Chapter 1 Part One By nature, the Jaila were ...

Thank you very much for your replies guys :D This is my first real go at fantasy so I very much appreciate the help. Hmm...I wasnt quite sure about that ...