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Hi Clo. Thank you very much for taking a look at it, I know it's quite long. But thank you, I appreciate it :D 'Fug' in the top line isnt ...

I know this is long, apologies. I can break it up if it is too long. This is a very rough first chapter, although probably not a complete chapter. Im ...

JACK JONATHON MONALOGE JACK JONATHON IS BASED IN WHAT WOULD BE TO US THE YEAR 5088 THEY REFERE TO US AS THE ANCIENTS AND KNOW THAT WE DESTROYED OURSELVES IN ...

Chapter One: Escape Sam could hear it gorging on the last unfortunate person dropped into the Pit, and she knew it was almost her turn. She had studied the order ...

Thanks Stella! You're right, description is missing. Hmmm....I will go back and put some when I go back to me. You know what, I had no idea you could do ...

Next bit guys! Chapter 1, Part 1 By nature, the Jaila were used to the tough environment of their home valley. Nestled awkwardly between the two kingdoms of Katoric and ...

Haha I know what you mean, I dont like it myself when people say 'tell us more, tell us more!' when you're waiting to tell them it later. But it's ...

Recently, I have been working on my first novel ever. Originally, it started out as a script for a series I was going to create with "MovieStorm". I decided it ...

Thanks for all the reviews so far guys! This is the next bit, chapter 1 but not all of it yet. Chapter 1 Part One By nature, the Jaila were ...

Thank you very much for your replies guys :D This is my first real go at fantasy so I very much appreciate the help. Hmm...I wasnt quite sure about that ...

You're touching on a good idea but the grammar jars it. And although it could work well as a beginning to a story, it still needs a bit of bulking ...

Hey guys! Nice to get such a lovely responses to a simple hello! Thanks guys :D Um...I write lots of random stuff. I'm not good at short stories because it ...

This is the first thing I'm posting on here and I would really appreciate someone taking a look at it. Please dont be too harsh though, constructive criticism only! p.s. ...

Let them hate us as long as they fear us - Caligula Chapter 1 King Ashurbanipal was lying on his bed. He coughed weakly and turned towards the golden double ...

Thanks for reading! It might look computer's tab is strange, so I had to edit the format a lot. Edit: Ugh, it didn't work... sorry! (the double spacing) Copy and ...