Lena

[s]Curiously timid,[/s] Lily Andrews timidly rushed through the [s]locker adorned[/s] halls of Peters[s]V[/s] v ille High, keeping a wary eye out for any teachers or h [s]H[/s]all m Monitors who ...

Er... Kenni, all the places where Dommie said to put commas were correct. I didn't see anywhere where there needed to be an apostrophe. Maybe I didn't look hard enough, ...