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Re: Forever
knock on our front door awakes Try "the" instead of "our". clock.It's There should be a space between "clock." and "it's". In the other room Unless the house only has ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: 3. Flying [Over the Atlantic]
There should be commas after both "yeah's". And the I've should normally be "I have", but since this piece is already so informal with all the "yeah's", I guess it's ...
Dec 19, 2009