Lemonly

Ah, I love haikus. I don't see anything wrong with this (which is pretty much my excuse for the fact that I have no idea how to critique) but my ...

Haha, I really like this, made me chuckle, though I'm not sure if I was supposed to? Anyway, I was drawn to the title like "What the heck?" So I'm ...

Woah, didn't see that one coming. I was expecting a dark but humorous poem when I saw He was a sweet young boy His name was Kevin Killed by a ...

Ah, everything about this poem is so lovely and poetic. I really liked the 'converse with the sweet birds in the baby-soft clouds' part. Nothing really popped out to me ...

I enjoyed this, though I agree with the others. It wouldn't hurt to add some conflict into it, so it's more exciting. It's extremely cute though, reminds me of something ...

I really like this. It was a good and creative idea.. Who knew there could be a story behind litter? I agree with Jasmine, I think "There’s a story in ...

Oh wow, this is really neat! I love how they were drawn, and so neat and clean as well. I adore Rita's eyes, for some odd reason I keep looking ...

I love this, and I hate charcoal. Looks real nice and all, but sooo messy.. Not the picture, charcoal. But he is definitely awesome. I love the nose, really. I ...

Wow, she is amazing. I have a thing for black and white cats, though I don't own one.. I just have a thing for cats in general, since I have ...

We had a competition in our English, to see who had the best insults, a little face off of sorts. I, of course, lost these for I hand a huge ...

I really, really, loved how you described this. I could really see everything that you were explaining (which means you weren't really explaining at all) and painted a picture. I ...

This was really nice, kind of mysterious and mhm. I enjoyed it, it made sense.. But I am very paranoid now! :) Goooodjob.

I see nothing wrong with this.. I like it. Hmm.. Interesting. I can officially declare I'm a fence in high school! Thank you for this new lovely metaphor I am ...

I am absolutely the worst person to critique ANYTHING.. but whatever. You don't mind now, do you? This was amazingly cute and funny and random.. I loved every bit of ...