Lemikita

Great! I really liked this chapter. I don't know, I would have thought this would be a difficult chapter to write for you. But you managed really well and even ...

Then he started feeling stupid. What kind of idiot was he, standing here ogling at the stars like they were a hundred million pairs of perfectly-formed breasts? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

I can only agree with the above review. I really liked it, even more as the first chapter this sucked me in and I couldn't stop reading. It flows naturally, ...

Yay! Chapter! Chance to procrastinate! No matter what you think, I think it was good. One thing, I think you did this before, is that when you flashback, you use ...

*le gasp*!!! I just realized I read this but never got around to reviewing it! Oh my, what a bad friend I am... I really liked it. It's funny, flows ...

Loved your passion. I think you saved me some disappointment, had I ever come across this book and thought about reading it. You should do more reviews, seeing as you ...

Yay!!! YAAAY!!!! Hahaha, so much for "You don't have to comment or review or even read it, because it's been so long..."! Just face it: We've all been waiting for ...

Great! Only thing I found was this: Eristoff? I would have put just vodka or tequila or something. Also: "...Auf Wiederhoeren." I would have put Tschuess on both ends. Or ...

I know, I know, I'm late... I just haven't had any chance to do any reviews! I hadn't even read it till today! Despicable me... :P I really liked this ...

Great! Once again... Ugh, I'll get this over with, because I won't help you much anyways. I really liked it, I love your style (duh) and I'm really looking forward ...

Yay, another chapter up (or at least part of it)! No nitpicking here, I always knew what what going on, I wasn't confused at all, your grammar and spelling are ...

Good chapter, as always. Just one thing: If Scott had went to his Father while Shanna and Riley slept, wouldn't it be better for Silas to say "I was expecting ...

Liked them, overall, I think you did pretty well for your first set of Haikus. The only thing that caught my attention was in the second Haiku. The repetition in ...

Not much to complain here, I loved it! As usual, I do have something to say, otherwise I wouldn't be reviewing. The pack shuffled disconsolately before settling down with a ...

Hi! On to reviewing... Besides the nit-picking that has been done already, I just wanted to ask a few questions: 1.) About the trust thing. I think in the previous ...