Leja

*title edited for screaming capitalizations*

1. Pretty! I love big trees! ^_^ And I like the bicycle on the side and the water in the background ^_^ 2. Nice angle; like you're hiding in the ...

He was fifteen when got published, but no big deal about that. Catherine Webb was fourteen, and her books are brilliant. Exactly! A good book's a good book, no matter ...

So my physics professor once gave an example of time travel using a train, something about the train being stretched way out and the person standing on top of the ...

You could pick your favourite three or four stanzas to read; then you wouldn't have to be reciting forever ^_^

It's an epilogue? But you say it's just the first part, so did you mean prologue? Hiroko (Annoyed) You ask me the same question every morning, and I give you ...

I didn't find this particularly romantic. The two characters just seemed to go on and on bickering with or analyzing each other. EDIT: to finish the crit... Dialogue can be ...

I rather liked the premise of it, actually. And self-deprecation will get you nowhere. Most of what I'd like to critique is the wording. There are alot of pronouns and ...

All a Christan has to do is believe that Jesus died on the cross, and that's it. The Christian faith is one based on just that, faith. Actually the foundation ...

Banned for being a picky Orlando Bloom fan :wink:

1093 *cries and goes to write* EDIT (six hours later): 7,722 :P

I'm here in bed, but my mind is still in that suffocating office cube at work. You should work on showing rather than telling. The office cubicle might be suffocating, ...

^ Please! I can't take the suspense!

Cherry blossoms

Jill is an amusing character. I hope she becomes more relevant in later chapters, though. I confused her with Jennifer from earlier chapters, so I don't know if the name ...