Leja

I like the second part more than I like the first part. The first seems rather drawn out and almost overexpanded while the second part is new and mysterious that ...

eh, crudeness aside, I suppose the only thing I have to say is that you've put the words together very nicely. And I just might have liked the rhyming here. ...

From the title, the reader can infer that the poem is about the narrator being a nomad. But what does that mean? Of what consequence is it in other aspects ...

bionic

First, may I say I really like the title? Because I do :D Lovely premise! I like very much. Especially the first few lines in relation to the last few ...

The rhymes made me think of this more as song lyrics than a poem; like they're something to be spoken or sung rather than read. Your body feels broken apart, ...

There doesn't seem to be much here. Not because it's so short, because there can be incredibly weighty poems that only last a few lines, but I felt like you ...

*jumps up and down* My plot makes sense now! My plot makes sense now! I have a plot! I have a plot! And I think I've finally broken into the ...

*dances* I can't wait! :D

I really liked the bleeding pheromones/soldier part in the beginning, but I think the following adjectives just bogged things down without adding much that was helpful. It's something that works ...

And here, on the oceanside - bone framework starved to ashes - the melody sings back to me, the beguiling tides of years before. ^ nice! I had to read ...

The Thief Lord's mask! Oh good I'm not the only one! XD

Oh, The Thief Lord was nice ^_^ though I watched the movie first. And I suppose I got caught up in the setting more than the story XD But Inkheart ...

hat

Hah, excellent books? yesh; the above is definitely sarcasm ^_^