Leja

I bet there'll be a mad flood of emails now :shock:

The first stanza was rather list-like for my taste. It also lacks much of a subject, seen in the lines: "That doesn't hurt./Have the power to stop and save/But in ...

I adore this book. I read it first when I was little, and it took me a while to figure out what the wrinkle in time referred to, lol. Like ...

It's a solid beginning, but n my opinion, it's missing some unity. Yes, each line relates to the concept of a mirror, but they don't really relate to each other, ...

This made me think more of a rant than a poem, probably due to the exclamation points. Being angry is fine; being clever and angry is awesomeness. The "cell-block" idea ...

*shifty eyes* No, no, why would I be trying to do so!Dragon!mething like that? :wink:

*shifty eyes* No, no, why would I be trying to do so!Dragon!mething like that? :wink:

But how many people were named Jesus, even back then?

Huh. I thought it was undisputed that there was a historical Jesus as well as a "religiously based" Jesus [though of course they're the same person, just in different contexts]. ...

Yeah, go with the flow and everything will turn out like it should.

^ :giggle: ...I've been getting into this bad habit of changing the plot halfway through the scene XD Like, Connie will be at the train station, and I'll mid-sentence put ...

*complains* Well, Horace wasn't a choice :wink:

Bartemius, ftw!

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As hard as I tried, I was never really able to convince myself that imaginary friends were real (or as real as a child will see them, that is). And ...