Leja

I found the one-word lines rather annoying and without purpose. Especially since there were alot of repeated words. And especially here: Truth is gone when did it leave us here ...

In anthropology, it's called a kerf-- the outline of a cut across bone before incision; a lie whose only cover is a disarticulated joint, ball-and-socket split, cracked ribs. I'm so ...

My first question is whether you based this upon your own experience, or what various media tell you is happening to teenage culture? Because I'm sure they are two very ...

*sings along with Cade and dances in the confetti* whee! Happy birthday, YWS. And I like the new logo, by the way ^_^

Surprisingly, I really like the title. And I like the rhyme of the first two lines, though not so much most of the other rhymes. Eh, upon a second look, ...

I think that this poem could be much improved by the elimination of the rhyme scheme. When I read it, what jumps out at me is the fact that it ...

I had a big problem with the "I'm like the caged bird that sings" line. Because it's so close to Maya Angelou's title I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings ...

disgusting

Ah; I think that is more or less what I was thinking of. Thanks, Perra.

The pain, my flesh, ripped open. The salt, the wound, it stings. The blood, the sweat, the tears I shed. The pain, the love, the fear I felt. ^ This ...

He he he ^_^ 10/10

You should, alleycat! The series is most excellent ^_^ And on that note... who's read Extras? :D I liked it very much. Especially the face ranks and the concept of ...

The ending should be based upon the previous actions of every character and every situation thus far in the story, or it will mean little to nothing. As such, I ...

I found most of these words empty of meaning. They're all things I've heard previously to describe music, and I've always wondered why. "Music is beauty" How is music beauty? ...

Yay! Finding things is fun! :D