Leja

I think... it's rather funny. But I don't know if I'm reading it correctly. I'm currently interpreting "save everyone" not as "help everyone" but as "except for everyone". If I'm ...

I'm wondering if someone can recommend me some music? I like the way Regina Spektor sings, and I like the way the French singer Camille's lyrics are more... poetic than ...

Hey Candace; welcome! You have a writing internship with CosmoGirl! ? That's awesome! What do you do with that? Like, do you email them things periodically, or do you go ...

Crysi: you look awesome in your uniform! Fand: the random knob on the wall totally steals the shot (jk!) Elizabeth: so pretty! And I love your dress ^_^

Aren't you supposed to know?

I don't know if I could live without snow!

It'd say to file this title idea away for a while, and work on something else. Maybe somewhere down the road, you'll have a story in need of a title ...

"Jacob" sounds interesting, as does Blank. Good luck!

Reading this, I thought I should be almost more afraid than I was. It's this horrible situation, but everything happened almost emotionlessly. I think this comes from too much treatment ...

I'm not sure what you mean by controversy. Do you mean to create a controversy within the story (two opposing groups, for instance) or take an existing issue and apply ...

I find that arms, hands, and legs are the hardest to draw, but you've done them flawlessly. The end of the gun, where she holds it in her right hand, ...

To begin with the first sentence, you might want to think of a different comparison than horses' hooves to thunder. Is that there because it's really what you've always thought ...

The only fault in a story with elves and dwarves and gnomes isn't that all the ideas have been taken: it's your fault for doing those cliches anyway! These are ...

I thought it was funny in general, but I also thought the parts about shooting were unnecessary as they didn't relate at all to the books. This whole thing was ...

As Leo woke, there are nothing but pain. It coursed through his body, a sharp sting like a thousand serrated knives attacking him inside and out. The pain displaced all ...