Leja

I liked the part at the beginning; the questioning of what is being defined. Very nice: Insecurity The sound of it In- Secure- Meaning What follows is alright, but a ...

Oh my goodness :shock: You have a new avvie! The old one was so entertaining XD *shiny* :D

Broke 19.000 today!! *dances*

When in doubt, look to the history books. I find Paris and Russia to be rather interesting.

Scott Westerfeld ^_^

I like the techniques in it; the alliteration, and maybe even the rhyming (which normally, I absolutely detest), but I don't know if the subject really goes anywhere? She's like ...

See, seven itself is a lucky number. But the more zeros you add on to it, the more unlucky it becomes! *makes things up* :D

I would say phew! Someone finally proofread! Now there's something to critique! and proceed to critique it.

The deadline was last Thursday :(

Or like an "Oops, I really didn't mean to say that" smiley.

Mrs. Mills [insert couch here] This... was on a line all by itself, in the middle of a big empty space. And I still can't figure out what I was ...

15,333 I broke 15000! I broke 15000! *runs in circles* I WILL be less than 10,000 words behind by tonight (only another 9000 words or so). I don't care what ...

I'm not a big fan of repetition, but here it might work. Can't quite decide if it does at the moment, but it could. Within the repetition, however, I'm not ...

Don't worry too much; we understand ^_^ Good luck with finals, Nate!

It's at the library, and I read it once, but found the prose boring, the poetry shallow, and the commentary/book reviews to be hopeless regurgitations of what the reviewer had ...