Leja

I don't really have any idea of what's going on here, other than that it's about the grim reaper? Work on the rhythm of certain lines so that they flow ...

Reading through this the first time, I felt like there were almost too many words, like things were said more properly than they needed to be. Watch out for archaic ...

This was a very interesting poem to read, mostly because for a little while, I wasn't quite sure what to make of it, seeing things running out in every which ...

There's lots of good stuff going on here.I like how you kept the same tone throughout the poem and there was a nice mix of concrete images (a heart lying ...

Awesome! Glad you're here :D Stating the obvious can be helpful more often than you may think, haha. Props for writing a novel! Futuristic fantasy is an awesome genre and ...

How would you specifically use more money, thunderdude? I think there's a missing link between middle school and high school: middle school teachers teach what they perceive high school students ...

It looks like everything hinges on how the girl makes the situation worse. After you figure that out, everything should fall into place. I won't give specific suggestions because the ...

This reminds me a lot of the Jabberwock because it's essentially narrative nonsense, but you can still vaguely follow a storyline. If you can take seriously writing 'nonsense', you could ...

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1. What are points for? 2. How do I post a story? 3. How do I change the words under my name? (I can't think of any more that are ...

He showed you how to gently pull at the luminous threads of your soul to loosen it. This line made the poem for me. Prior to that, it had been ...

Yes! It's about this city that's trying to secede from the surrounding country and the ramifications of that for the main character and the narrator. Basically, I think that decentralization ...

*moved to lyrics*

First off, I really really like the way you started this, with the vague question as the first line ^_^ From the first stanza on, I wanted to read this ...

Like everyone else has said, it's not a big deal where you post your story. Other Fiction is always a safe choice if you're not sure, but as long as ...