Leja

At the end of reading this, I'm left asking "why? how?" The moon is watching over the subject, yes, and the subject wants to join her and the other things ...

I'm getting distraught with my first draft, because I feel like I don't know what my character's have in mind. This could probably be an outline in itself. A list, ...

I guess I can't really say I actually outline . I mean, I'll write things down in a list-sort of fashion, with random arrows and stars and notes all over ...

That's better :D

Oy, take that question mark out of your title! Everyone needs a break at some time or another. Glad you're back.

I like the first line, how it's staggered so it seems like you are taking a gasping breath before you go underwater. But why crucifix arms? I mean, I see ...

*sigh* I always wondered Why would I make one of these writers corner? That's what my blog is for . But my blog goes so off topic that seriously, I ...

If you don't believe me, take a look at the way you're sitting right now. Don't move, just think about how you've positioned your body. lol, I'm totally slouching like ...

The rhymes used here are the obvious ones you think of when trying to rhyme. There's nothing new there and as a result, it sticks out like a sore thumb, ...

too many characters; this is a particular pitfall of mine, silly me. I've found that when I have too many characters, I can often combine two or three into one, ...

Welcome back, JC. Bella's such an adorable name ^_^ Best of luck, -Amelia

Awesome, I get to be 18! But wait... I missed my party? Awwww. Me too! Wait... *waves wand and cake appears* See Heather? Party ^^

ftw! :D

In the second stanza, I'm not sure if "pawn it off" works since what follows talks about how breath is being extracted. Almost like the action has been inverted. In ...

I must say, I'm a big fan of NaNoWriMo.org. My favorite part of that site is the section that indexes everyone who's knowledgeable about something (any of the stickied topics ...