Leja

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Any outlining, actually, is helpful. I like webs better. For instance, I'll write the topic in a big circle in the middle of the page, then draw smaller circles around ...

The first thing that came to my mind: shout "Cool!" and then go shopping XD but actually, I think I would first go and fine a newspaper. What would you ...

*covers ears* No! Don't make me think about finals yet; I'm still trying to live in denial. Looking forward to: English final. Woot for all essays about the book we've ...

The first time I read this through, I didn't like it because cherries don't burn. Well, I suppose they could (as is the case of many things) but they don't, ...

You're right, Wiggy, I think that the church community plays a big role in how you approach Sunday mass. Personally, my church is a bit... odd and disjointed in that ...

Hola, Shriek! A lot of the sentences in the first paragraph are to the tune of [topic][explanation]. Ex: "Reese Ryan was one of those girls" [topic] "You know, one of ...

My first thought was Ahh, she didn't capitalize "I" anywhere! but then I realized that you don't capitalize "I" anywhere ever, so... I dunno. I'm sure I had a point, ...

Next you sit back down in your pew. Sometimes it's tough to find it again. XD I usually look for my Mom's purse and coat. Lol, I do the same ...

I. Growing Up in Sights and Sounds She thought everything that was just a great green spiderweb sans spider: spun from common agreement without the baseline thread. They tell us ...

puppy dogs? *is slightly confused* ah-hem. At any rate ^_^ the time for me is actually an hour ahead, rather than two hours behind like Via. Which is strange. Maybe ...

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So many pronouns at the beginning! Lots of "she [verb]..." and "Her [noun]..." And hence, the beginning seemed a little choppy like [action][action][action]. Affairs office for more than seven hours, ...

*pokes the countless others whom I solicited for crits* oooo-kay! :D Post One (also known as the Prologue) The first "you" addressing the reader was startling because there hadn't been ...

I still don't think that the crucifix reference holds, even after your explanation. Yes, Jesus was willing to give anything for those he loved. Here, it seems like the subject ...