Leja

Hmm, let me start one of these before I forget... I have now been at YWS for almost nine months. Long time, phwoo! How it flies. And I've met some ...

Trying to skip in the river from one rock to the next, (maybe you mean stream? River is too strong to skip in. Exactly.

Random points: - The "But a poem should be..." establishes that what was before was not a poem, and how that could be remedied. - It doesn't matter who he ...

Who'll Drain the River for You? (EDITED): In trying to skip in the river from one rock to the next, her skirt caught, as always, with a current ready to ...

The first thing I saw was a lot of punctuation. It caught my eye and seemed to clutter up the ends of the lines. Do you really need it all? ...

Jack's back! yay! see you around, -Amelia

Thanks for everything! All of you guys thought the same thing--it's too abstract, too unconnected. I agree. Here's what I see it as: On the steps to school a senior ...

This all sounds very nice, but I think you need to connect the dots just a bit further because honestly, I have no idea what's being said. It's a pretty ...

Yay! Cal's back!

^ I think you can make a group for YWS? Awesome website!

“Looks like someone fell asleep in back,” Penny teased as she passed me on the way to the stairs. I was caught between wanting to push her and wanting to ...

psh, I fold pages, I underline and highlight and star, I write notes, I reference other parts of the book, and oh goodness, sticky-notes make my life. Makes everything seem ...

First off, I love the poem you put at the beginning; I think it introduces everything perfectly as almost a procession into the rest of the story. And the rest ...

So the first thing I saw when I looked at this post was "miracle nose warmer" out of context, and it was so random that I started cracking up XD ...

I thought that the last stanza was a little random. I mean, yes, cats do these things, but reading it, it just seemed like words to fill up space. Not ...