Leja

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Oh, stop trying to take all the credit, Snoink :P

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Comment dramatique!

*releases balloons* Happy Birthday, Crysi!

I loved the first line. It's the kind of thing that, given the rest of a paragraph to read, would make me do a head/desk and say "Just get to ...

The first three paragraphs had too much information and I found myself skimming/skipping them. Elements of them could be added to later description: the fact that Miranda is six times ...

A quick note on format: adding a space between paragraphs would help out tremendously; my eyes get really lost on the page currently. There is so much dialogue here, I ...

I love the first stanza, how it's worded. The forth stanza, I don't know. The should be there but aren't bit doesn't seem as carefully worded as everything else, and ...

I see what you mean; it's with the second stanza. The first stanza has lovely strong words, the contrast between hot and cold, but the only 'focused' word in the ...

So what's it about? And I must say, labeling any book as an "inspirational novel for youth" instantly turns me off to it.

Illustrious illusions integrate with icebreakers the ironclad ideologies of the infamously interpreted illustrations. Next letter: F

I was wondering the same thing! And who's going to give you permission to frighten their horse anyway? XD

7/10 cute.

I didn't get as much of a sense of the setting from this chapter as I have from previous chapters; it's like the characters are taking for granted the world ...