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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Wish granted, but the sauce doesn't taste so hot instead. I wish I knew more about computers.
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Pretty new glasses, Penguin ^_^
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: Ma'am
In this modern time, is it ever appropriate to call someone "Ma'am" or "Sir" anymore? If so, where/when?
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: The Children of Summer
Ohhh..., we're children of the summer. Ahhh..., we're the lords and kings of bummers. (So what?) We are content with going under. (Life) Ahhh.... I don't know if the "We ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: Happy New Year, Indeed.
The tone was nice, the pacing was nice, the language was nice. At first, I wondered if more details of setting would be a nice addition, but as I think ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: New member...need help!!
We like people who like grammar ^_^ Welcome! Let me know if you need help finding your way around. -Amelia
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: The Glory of Grey
I like the mellowing of the bright fields and butterflies ^_^ As to furthering the glory of grey, I almost want to say do more with the cat's actions in ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: The Glory of Grey
Between lines three and four, it seemed like phrases strung together rather than a unified thing. But that was the only place. I think too many questions. I know there're ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee #1
I'm going to attempt to use green things throughout the other poems for references to nature, newness, and sickness. Dunno yet if it'll work, but I'll try ^_^ spun in ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Writing ABC's
D: denouement
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Writing ABC's
B: Borders Books and Music
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds more like an action thriller to me (yes, I know you say it's fantasy). Probably not something I'd be inclined to read, given that it's a single word that ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: both of you. kitchen. now!
Man, Heather stole my line XD Cool that you're Razor's cousin ^_^ If you have any questions feel free to ask! see you around, Amelia
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee #2
II. Lena Steps In Every day she looks out across the square, sees the high-rises over run with plants that fall out windows and spill off roof edges. And then ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: A Possible Big Change To Stories & Poems
But they would be able to post their work at once anyway; the three hundred points you start with would allow for posting of two literary works. This system would ...
Dec 27, 2007
