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Re: Iowa wins for Huckabee and Obama
(Well, if I would've posted it if I wasn't at school all day ^^) I heard on NPR this morning that Obama got 60% of the youngest demographic (can't remember ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: YWS Groups Makeover Phase 1
Woah! It's pretty :D (Not that I thought it wouldn't be, of course)
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Omg! It's YWS Radio On, Like, Sunday, Like, January 6! Omg!
Haha, I was looking at the recent posts list and saw the title of this one right above the "YWS Groups Makeover" so of course my eyes read it initially ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Algebra homework
MidnightVampire, what do you need to do with the problem? Do you need to know how to factor it all out or are you solving for x?
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Starting a sentence with And or But
Technically-grammatically, it's totally incorrect. But that doesn't mean it isn't effective for style (just like this sentence ^_^)
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Writing Resolutions
- Finish my ongoing story [finally] - do a full edit on said story at least once - Perfect my theme series of poetry type thing - think up something ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: My Sugar Glass Heart
(speaking voice) Down a ginger bread building, my sugar glass heart falls, to shatter at your feet. I love love love this part because of it's allusions to gingerbread houses ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Happy New Years! Resolutions too!
I'm trying to read an even hundred books.
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: I hate Life
This had little insight beyond the fact that the subject dislikes his/her life. Honestly, it read like a whiny rant. There's little meditation on what's so bad about said life, ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Have finished The Picture of Dorian Gray! Now on to Anna Karenina :D
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: I would like to know if my novel is any good.
Like Suz said, edit-edit-edit. It can only get better over time. Even in the process of typing it up, I'm sure you'll notice things that you didn't notice while writing.
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: 5 Tips for Realistic Characters
5 Tips for More Realistic Characters* *Results may vary ah-hem, what's with this disclaimer at the beginning? :P Lovely article, Razo
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Reaching for the Stars-or something...
Stella needs Fred because he's the only friend she's got and her only connection to the real world. Fred needs Stella because, well, he needs a purpose. Whee; now you ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Victorian America/England/India/Spain...
Dunno if you're still working on this or not... But I came across this lovely little site today: (woot for StumbleUpon) and thought it might be helpful ^_^ G'luck!
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Insomnia
I think that in the second verse, week and sleep make an awkward rhyme; maybe less so if there were fewer actual words in the line? Maybe "I can't seem ...
Jan 1, 2008