Leja

april the sixth today was a weird day for poetry i. A floating staircase, as from Cinderella's world, the foyer branches out on all sides like a phylogenic wagon wheel ...

april the fifth Five tossed in a car and laughing ourselves down the road and sliding (internally blushing) into the front row after everyone else rushed in. Our chairs don't ...

april the fourth let's get metaphysical [removed] [will return to finish later]

So I'm so excited that NaPo has a bigger online presence this year! I've read blogs in passing that'll just say like "oh yeah, I've been doing napowrimo for the ...

This one is silly and bad and I apologize for it But I love the title! :D

the only ball in town: loveliness in three parts 1. The word "metropolis" 2. The third stanza has nice sonics. 3. they imitate deep voices and swear like old men ...

Leja, Also the title of your thread is awesome, it immediately made me think of Wordsworth's Tintern Abbey . Woot for influence of BritLit! :D

Yeah, I don't really know either. april the third "Kiss me, I'm Irish is one of the many ways in which the continued subjugation and disappropriation of women is perpetuated." ...

april the second [[removed] (11:30. again)

I did actually write this on the first -- barely (23:30). I'm so excited that NaPoWriMo is a big thing again this year! Good luck to everyone! april the first ...

whoop!! love it ^_^

I really like how crisp the trees are in the background. Usually, it's lighter in the foreground and more shadowy behind that, but this is a nice inversion ^_^ I ...

That makes sense, but that sort of theme isn't apparant in the poem, so it's still a little confusing. Definitely something to explore, though!

This is adorable! I know, not necessarily what you were going for, but the girl in the picture just looks like she's having such a good day ^_^ And I ...

This poem, though little, does its job well. The rhythm works and the rhyme isn't overdone. In that sense, good work! I do have questions about a few aspects of ...