Leja

What is a CV? *is a Silly American (TM)*

Gadi, this begins wonderfully, with a clear tone that shows you know where you're going. As such, as a reader, I can't help but be swept up for the ride. ...

Mrs. Mills: [narrows eyes at Bao] Bao: Eh, in that case, I suppose... s***, that rules out all of them! Where's your favourite place to stargaze?

Oh, I see. Accent the We . I was accenting the all , and that's why I was having problems XD

There are many people whom I would encourage to eat this article in its entirety and thoroughly digest all the information in it (er, that was a compliment, I swear!). ...

Bao: It was "sword". I was admiring one of the decorations on the wall. Connie: "Couch". Definitely. Hey! Stop making fun of me! Stuff it, Charlie, or watch how fast ...

We all knew you were the best *flail* I can't make the beats work for this line! Although I hope Sam stays alive and well, this was very cute, Suz ...

This almost seems more like a book report than the beginning of a novel. Why? Because it summarizes the character. There's no action. Pure description takes us out of the ...

I wish this were written more seriously. Because then I think it'd be hilarious. Now, it's a series of actions and observations loosely tied together with a setting. I think ...

Beginning with "friend" and ending with "love, I'm sorry" is actually very nice. It shows a nice progression from the beginning to the end. It shows change. However, it is ...

I love how this begins, with the phrase in italics (I'm not sure whether to consider the quote as the start of the actual poem or as the preface to ...

Brutal? I'd love to ^_^ First, let it be said that I abhor rhyming poems. I shall refrain from that statement here, however, because it doesn't overpower the poem too ...

There is no way to see the "mangled insides" if the poem is strewn with generalities like "i'm fed up with what you're feeding me/ i think i'll break inside". ...

You are in no way breaking the mold if you use the phrase "break the mold". Originality stems from finding new ways to describe things that are tired, from breathing ...

The whole point of this poem is to show off the rhyme scheme. Trust me, not a good idea. After that, it hinges on the statement that can be summed ...