Leja

This is too general to incite any kind of feeling in a person. It's all in the "not being able to do anything" that will evoke something. A motivational speaker ...

I was Amelia, now I'm Leja. Hello again, all ^_^

And I could also write a reply like this without any punctuation so the post could be open to interpretation as well but it really reads like it's all one ...

This book is the anti-romance if there ever was one :lol: But all the parallels are interesting to take a look at!

Cool feature, Nate :) There is a change--and I am poor, Canst thou love me, lady? You are blind like us. Your hurt no man designed, How... poetic Ph?bus was ...

hahaha *ah-hem* (haha) ... when you don't think in phrases, but rather are subdividing them. ... if you get annoyed when school bells or car horns are out of tune ...

Tennis, yes? This has a nice, hurried feeling to it that works well as a whole. Just make sure you watch the rhythm; some of the lines had a lot ...

Yes, yes they do :(

My problem with this poem is that I finish it saying "so what? Good for the narrator, I guess". It doesn't say anything new about the subject. It's a long ...

I love the title ^^ And I love things like the stars dribbling, beautiful word choice. Nice juxtaposition between sea and sky. There is nothing left to say but "good ...

The whole point of this poem is a set up for the last two lines. And that makes me wonder why the rest of this poem is there. Free yourself ...

I like the first italization of smiling because it makes it sound wonderfully repulsive. I’ve been doing nothing, really --why ask?— and yes, my mother is doing all right. I ...

(a quick note on the title: the use of "1st" instead of "first" in this context comes off as lazy. Numbers up to one hundred should generally be spelled out.) ...

This is lovely. The description is light and careful, and there is just the right combination for pacing of action and description. "The water below, So endless and inviting, Is ...

The one way to guarantee I (and, I assume, many others) don't want to read something is to put something cutesy in the title. Like a heart. Especially in Romantic ...