Leja

8/10 I can understand that!

Skiing!! Fun ^_^ Have a great time, Heather!

Happy birthday, Dono! *gives balloons* :D

I like to write during lunch. It's rather relaxing, and there's not much else you can be doing anyway ^_^ Other than that, it helps to get school assignments done ...

*tacklehugs* That's amazing, Ari! You must be so excited (duh xD)!

Everything is in such a sad tone! I don't know if I'm just noticing this of if it's been prevelant throughout. In the case of the grief counselor, the things ...

Your writing doesn't have to be a secret. Just because you're, say, a teacher doesn't mean you can't write as well. Granted, it might be a touch more difficult, but ...

I found this poem to be rather a disappointment, actually. By your warning, I expected something shocking, something that I've never heard before, that would make me sit up straighter ...

La Perfecticita dice: Titles are fun (thanks!) ^_^ Happy anniversary! You're two whole YWS-years older than I am.

So basically? I lurveee how this is divided into sections. It's this nice mix of viewpoints and the added bonus of actually advancing the actions, which all too many multiple-viewpoint ...

This is a very vague poem. The "you" is undefined, there's a lot of "it"s and "there"s. How could anyone relate if it's not specific enough for them to catch? ...

Aloha, Faerlan! First, look through your transitions between phrases/ sentences. The first line, for example, I think that you should end with a semicolon (because each phrase can stand on ...

The first stanza seems a little disconnected. Each phrase seems to halt at the end, rather than skip to the next one. Like Chevy, I have a hard time finding ...

Additionally, I should just come to terms with the fact that all of my stories will feature death, feature snarky male characters, and that a high percentage of aforementioned snarky ...

No, no way. Any game labeled guaranteed to drive you crazy I think I need to stay far away from! XD