Leja

^ known for being off the wall [like Vans skate shoes XD]!

No worries about font; personally, I only find it annoying if someone's used it when they don't have any format to preserve, but that is not the case here ^_^ ...

Aloha, Suz! Chapter One (1) Does this have enough hook? It didn't, but then Agatha started talking about blood on the ceiling and how people were being killed without her ...

Give me that cigarette so that my lungs can turn as black as yours and I can have a reason to gasp. This is a nice intro to the rest ...

This is the kind of poem that should have a lot of emotion behind it, but I don't find that to be true here. It's all actions and telling from ...

Gaze upon the sheep of Earth None of which have names. All numbered to be counted While our leaders slumber, tame. Granted, the image as a whole is rather obvious. ...

Within the first two lines, I could tell where the rest of the poem was going. This isn't so great because if I know the whole poem with just the ...

I think you're trying a little too hard to be cryptic here, especially in the first two lines. They really don't need to be so long, so use this opportunity ...

lol, you're not even close ^_^ Though it's not entirely your fault. There's a missing link here that I kind of forgot to write. Hmm, I'll get around to fixing ...

Right away, the title caught my eye. Even though it's only one word, and a pretty common one at that, it set a nice mood for the rest of the ...

You are correct! This is just raw emotion Note: anyone who told you that poetry needs to rhyme to exist as poetry was lying to you :wink: So it can ...

... ran over with a calculator, for some reason, in order to ...

Cool ^_^ I shall do my best!

I have something else planned for those days just to tease you a bit more Wink You enjoy watching us squirm, don't you? :P Kidding. At any rate, it shall ...

I find it easier to write from a girl's perspective. Guys' minds are a mystery to me :P Though of course, as everyone else has said, if the story calls ...