Leja

What is the title and who is the author?

Hello, my name is Connie and I am not in hiding.

[Part #01] Ooh! That means there'll be more, right? :D I like the title of "Play House"; I'm really excited to see what you do with it. At first, I ...

You know, the first time I read through, it really irked me. But you know? Now I really like it ^_^ It's just a different way of thinking around things ...

What I noticed right off the bat is that almost every sentence begins with a pronoun and after a while, it really starts to weight the story down. the skin ...

There's a lot of physical description here, which is fine, but for much of it, I don't see the point. I like the part about the mother's skin at the ...

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Okay ^_^ Sorry; didn't know if it was something new or not.

By all means, please do start a usergroup! Because as cool as the icons are, they really don't belong in the Book Reviews section :wink: (EDIT: go check the Usergroup ...

Have I ever told you how absolutely wonderful/amazing/awesome you are? :D

Look first at just the first word of every line. Do you note how most of them are the same? Repetition can be a useful technique, but when used unconsciously, ...

You know she's a flutist I despise you now :P (kidding) I didn't like most of it. A lot of the phrases seemed written only to support the musical phrases ...

I got a "Server Default Page for a while, around 4:30 EST, which was odd. I even took pictures ^_^ Does that help any?

This is very nice, Gadi. It's a nice, unified image that continues throughout but also progresses. At first I was thinking, "Oh. Dear. I have to read a WHOLE poem ...

Hello! Ooh, I'm so happy to see some Spanish around here ^_^ (by the way, don't feel like you have to translate everything. Some things just aren't as effective on ...