Leja

haha, that is an interesting conundrum, to be writing poems to someone who may not end up reading them. I really liked all the little details that were added. They ...

I like all the references to vision and sight in the first one. ^_^ And I like the cape that Time is in possession of. Very cool 8) I was ...

Woah woah wait a toad-pickin' minute, here. I thought SPEW didn't exist?! And now you're telling me that it does? And it has a birthday? Or that it doesn't exist, ...

Your April 1 poem made me feel rather uncomfortable, but that's a good thing! Eh, I don't know if there's much to say beyond that. In your April 2 poem, ...

Everything is very halting, due to all the periods and commas, but I can kinda see how that's an appropriate approach to the topic. Maybe combine a stanza or two ...

Basic Goals: - Develop style that mirrors the way I talk in fiction, but isn't fiction. - Use conventions of poetry that one can't use in fiction (effectively). - In ...

The one thing that stood out for me was that there was a lot of end-line punctuation in the first stanza. But that's just cosmetic ^_~ I like how this ...

#1. Odo Nnyew Fie Kwan Frame I have absolutely no idea what this means, but it looks supercool 8) *reads down a bit* And I like it in context too. ...

Normally, I don't particularly like questions in poetry, but the ones in the first poem were nice because they built off each other, and sort of made the topic their ...

I like the image you used in the April 1 poem, especially about the manuscript mopping up coffee. And I like how you began the second poem, with a simple ...

If you read the thing Google provided on why their page was black and you want to keep thier page black now, you can use http://www.blackle.com. It's the same thing ...

I really like the last two lines! :D

*** Day One Anywhere else, in a box of a world of bright lights screaming to be acknowledged in an echoingly imploded space in an undecorated unflourished note of notice, ...

In your pounded-out daily poems [:wink:], have you actually created something you found particularly brilliant on the first try? Also, like in the NaNo threads, share you completely nonsensical lines ...

Eew! I need to do something with my hair! Thanks for boosting my self-confidence Nate :P