Leja

After reading this poem, the biggest question I have is "why do you need love to succeed?" Sorry if that sounds slightly cynical; it's not a general life question, just ...

Aww; it's cute! ^_^

Of course, I wrote this one late again, and didn't have the motivation to turn on the computer that late XD So I'll probably be back later with today's poem. ...

Ooh! Congratulations everyone, and Adam is awesome for organizing this :D

I'll get right to this before the weekend's out! :D -Leja

I'm very confused by the last stanza. At first I thought it was along the lines of 'better to have lived a little than not at all' but then it ...

I love the fisherman-esque storylike quality to this ^_^ There are a lot images that I like individually, and of course I always like plays on words. Glad you're participating ...

The idea of giving someone your heart is so very overdone. This is not a new take on that situation, but a reiteration of what everyone already knows, that there'll ...

This poem was severely written to rhyme and it shows. As such, the rhythm is halting and makes things sound childlike. The other thing is that this is such a ...

Silver hair on silver dress, Midnight eyes that stare, Snow soft skin, and petal lips, A heart and hard as stone. With a smile that chills the heart, With hatred ...

None of these lines seem to connect from one to the next; it sounds like lines of cliches strung together and because of that, the poem as a whole ceases ...

A quick note: having a poll preface a literary work is not the best way to begin (they're better for non-literary things ^_^). I don't think that the repetition does ...

It was a little too rhyme-y for me, and because of that, I didn't find it making a lot of sense. There's not a lot that I found particularly new ...

The only fault I can find is that I was momentarily confused as to whether the old man or the the dock was full of splinters. Then I wondered if ...

Actually, I meant her to be more of a secretary as a meeting. Kinda like she wasn't good at anything else, so that's the only way she was allowed to ...