Leja

Hi tori, A lot of haikus traditionally describe some aspect of nature, but some of my favorites aren't really about anything at all. Take this famous one, for example: "Haiku ...

I really like the form you picked here; the structure and heraldry is cool to introduce a new baby, but keep up the same energy throughout the poem. I like ...

I really like the second one for the shading around the eyes and nose!

Sweetness!

I'm Settie (again) =) And I'm definitely going to need people yelling at me to not fall behind! (p.s. the yws thread of the nano site isn't working; it says ...

I have a confession to make. I was going to be a bad reader and skim through the first stanza and not comment, but then I actually started reading, and ...

I'm confused. I feel like I'm playing connect the dots when I should be painting by numbers. That is, you as the writer should make the initial connections between ideas, ...

on fires, and glowing orange fibers dance across your fingers like elastic bands, like lovelovelovelove. I'm sorry, that's not a very helpful way to start a review. But it's just ...

First, a brief non-critique: I think that part of why this hasn't gotten many responses is because you began by telling us that it's written to work out some feelings. ...

As a whole, I think you have a really good start here, it just needs a little solidifying. This could totally just be me, but I can't stand the word ...

I think I was on April 27th or so before I stopped. So close, yet so far! Then again, there were definitely days when I was writing [s]multiple[/s] makeup poems ...

That's so cool!

25. a poem in five parts i. We all head down to the shore looking for some waves and places to forget all our blue book lore smart water knows ...

20. the wizard of oz lost dorothy somewhere in the middle of spring semester Wind caught us up in a cycolone is unfortunate, flying around the world whether it wants ...

april the eighteenth Today I am a jenny Gen Y artist in a graphic print dress and an apron, walking around barefoot washing dishes and listening to hipster music, a ...