Leja

He was the people. This reminds me of Hamlet, in which the king's body functions as a metaphor for the entire kingdom ^_^ the voice and the primary object in ...

Rating changed to PG-13 for language

the laws all over town. laws? Even if it's a miss-type, I like it. And I like the lilting tone to the rest as well. ^_^

Welcome! I hope the fourth attempt at that book succeeds (I've totally been there myself ^_^)! What's your favorite genre? Everyone's already covered your questions, but if you have any ...

I like the wording of "wheezily" in the first stanza! :D Up until the third stanza, there isn't much happening. It's a lot of description of scenery, which is fine, ...

The problem with the repetition is that, while it's cute, it begins to devalue any romantic feelings about halfway through. It becomes formulaic, like giving a generic valentines card instead ...

Life is an ungodly thing - so much negative energy would destroy one god as it will destroy our species, one bullet one cry one stab in the dark. There ...

Okay, her eyes are doing all these things, but so what? :wink: This is a poem all about this girl's eyes, but I think it would be more meaningful if ...

Wow. Have you seen the Expert List recently? I mean, just look at it. There are ninety-six topics up there (!), not including the multiple topics that are listed together ...

My perfect world Is the world of night Why is death always equated with night? I see the connection between death and darkness, and darkness with night, but death to ...

The thing is, for a poem about emotion, there are absolutely no emotional qualities to it. You see the after effects of the emotion --hatred, jokes, crying, etc. -- but ...

I just thought of this, but how come the Resources area is seldom visited? Is it too clunky, confusing, or something else? Or is it just that it's an area ...

I currently have 700 reviews even. A nice round number to start off with :D My goal will be to do 50 *eep* reviews from now through the month of ...

Welcome back whence and Firearris ^_^ I'll be gone for a bit with school. See you all when I return! :D

I like the recurrence of airplanes and flight in this one. And "treading textile water" is an absolutely lovely phrase ^_^