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Re: Excommuni-moi
I think you'll find the following link helpful? Apparently, a female in St. Louis attempted to be ordained a Catholic priest and has been excommunicated. Details, implications, etc. in link ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: The Archetypal Amtrack
Okay, nice title much? (compliment! I swear!) ^_^ Kylan, there's train blood (sweet image), and soot, and all the things a grimy train station should have. This is lovely drawing ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Anti-Poetry
This seems more suited to performance poetry than anything (yes, I have seen the note about satire). There's a nice rhythm to it, but other than it being emotional, there's ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Listen to the Pacific
'peaces' does make sense. surely if you realize that i was comparing wars to 'games', you would be able to make sense of the word 'peaces'. *sigh*...it's really quite frustrating ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Listen to the Pacific
If you hadn't blatantly stated that this is about war, I probably would not have known. That is not something to aim for. In fact, if a poem cannot stand ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: how not to get published
Oh dear. Someone didn't have their wheaties that morning.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Rate YWS
I get this horrible feeling that I've just proven correct some outlandish human behaviour study.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Remember The Dynamic Avatars?
Oh! I thought the spike from the Capitol building was a mohawk :lol: Please rehide said folder? Kind of like a time capsule! Wouldn't want to bring these avatars back ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Sirens' Symphony *Edited 2nd May*
Quote: I like the specification of drinking rather than tasting, but doesn't the "use with caution" in the line that follows contradict this idea? Well use with caution as to ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Cure Me Please (Third Attempt)
Whee! :D The double-poem thing is a nice addition, especially given your reasoning behind it. And to that extent, the two poems contrast nicely with each other since there was ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Cure Me Please (Third Attempt)
Okay, let's take a closer look ^_^ Here are some places where you show: I sit on the cool marble floor, Whisper the formula I force myself to look beyond ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: alone
This is not a poem; this is a string of questions that even you don't seem to take seriously. Poetry is wonderful in that it allows you to share your ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: before, our breath held us.
B is here again ^_^ I love the imagery here, how each word advances the last. It's very pleasant (even if the vampire is not, haha). Some points of confusion: ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: How did everyone get on?
Closing ceremonies, so to speak :D Well, I didn't fare very well. I missed probably a grand total of half of April sometime in the middle of the month, haha. ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Faith
I am very very happy to see a poem dealing with prayer that is not a reiteration of worship songs (which are nice for church and singing, but not always ...
May 1, 2008
