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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but it finishes so late that it's then time for the next practice. I wish it was warm enough to be spring Claudette, that was an awesome response (see ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: The Rural Ruins
I like the idea you have, but you haven't given much description about where Drake and Vanessa are, so I'm a little confused; paragraph spacing would be helpful as well. ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Wish granted, but everything else becomes blurry. I wish I wish [s]I was a fish[/s] I could finish a story .
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Wish granted, but the only thing you can drink is soda, which will just dehydrate you more from all the sodium. I wish I could pass math
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: How To Write A Novel
This made me laugh. Alot. I especially liked the part about "sweet inspiration" although you can totally daydream during gym class. The more often you get hit in the head ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Babelfish translations
Translators rock my socks most days (no pun intended in conjunction with display picture). Except when I really do want to translate something. Dictionarys can be the same way. For ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
The wind shrieked in the branches above and the moon stabbed through the last leaves left in the canopy, pinning them to the trees, never to fall off. They sat ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Wish granted, but after today, it will never be Friday again. I wish that I knew how to program computers .
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
I'm going to have to side with hekategirl; I need the motivation to read LOTR. However, I have been reading Harry Potter since who knows when. I keep borrowing LOTR ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Wish granted, but now you seem too obvious. I wish that I had the courage to flirt in the first place .
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: School Uniforms
Personally, I wish my school mandated uniforms. I like the structure that they provide, and there's just something about them that seems conducive to academics and formality, which I absolutely ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Wish granted, but there's always something else to be done... like housework, etc. I wish that I could learn to keep my mouth shut
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Flash Fic- Break Into the Contents
"As the last rays of sunlight penetrated the forest, a small white figure emerged out of nothing" I found this sentence to be a little awkward, almost as if too ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: New
Hobbies= learning Yeah, that sounds INCREDIBLY nerdy, but learning is a very broad topic; I'm trying to learn Welsh, and I'm intent on learning Spanish to the point of fluency. ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but it's still not nearly enough. I wish I had all the sources I need for my thesis paper
Mar 22, 2007
