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Re: 6 Word Stories
And then he was alone
May 6, 2007 -
Re: You Are Drowning
My first thought after finishing this was "that was really sinister" my second thought was "yeah, but I kept reading, didn't I?" :D I liked it; I liked how the ...
May 6, 2007 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
He turned. She turned. They left.
May 6, 2007 -
Re: Life by Haiku
Procrastination Is my new favorite hobby But not my teachers'!
May 6, 2007 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?
Don't write what you know; write what you want to know.
May 5, 2007 -
Re: Smile
What really stuck out for me was how you varied the sentence length (whether consiously or unconsiously), which is good because it keeps the reader engaged in what they're reading. ...
May 4, 2007 -
Re: Thoughts of an Unsound Mind
Woe, surging like some misbegotten wave, I like the soft sounds of the "s" following woe, then the hard sounds of misbegotten Wrenchingly ripping the limpets Here, I like the ...
May 4, 2007 -
Re: Pseudonyms/using fake names online...good or bad?
I like going by my pseudonym because then I can be who I want to be without it being linked to who I am the rest of the time. Kind ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Life by Haiku
How can I complain Of playing soccer all day And dancing all night?
Apr 24, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
9/10 because the sephia makes it seem like classic summer, and I want summer to come!
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: A Letter
I liked it! It made me think, and I really did start noticing things more. My only suggestions are format: if there's specific line breaks, separate paragraphs with a space ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
9/10 It took me by surprise the first time I saw it... and I laugh out loud when it asks "did you just try to eat my head?"
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted. You drink too much Red Bull, fail a drug test, then have to sit in jail all night, bouncing off the walls. :) I wish I was math-savvy
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Confession
Starting a poem with the phrase "dead body" is certainly a way to draw people in. The bit: "Know that a stranger can disappear into a mid-sized city" seemed a ...
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: People Watching
Yes, I suppose it is a little creepy... but such fun!
Apr 9, 2007
