Leja

Arg, finals are coming up, and I can't keep spending so much free time on YWS. Though I seem to recall saying this before... maybe if spell it out in ...

*sigh* I do like that last line... but I'm looking at it again, and after all everyone has said... I think I am going to delete it. Thanks for your ...

Yes, maybe it would be better in Writing Tips; thanks, Imp. -Amelia

I like.... the one with the tree the most. I love the "green-ness" of it (it seems very fresh). But the sign is a close second, and all of them ...

Yes, it does look better now that you've cropped the random guy out. :D

6/10... kinda strange...Oz as in The Wizard of Oz ?

Passive voice makes me fall asleep. In my opinion, it keeps the reader detatched from both the story and the characters, the complete opposite of what you as the author ...

One of the best cures I've found for writers block is to write an interview auditioning scribes/muses to help you write. *sigh* sounds corny when I write it out...but it ...

*singsongs* I want to read EXTRAS... :D

I just finished this book for book club, and I must say, it was decent. For the fifty to hundred pages, I was thinking "oh no, this is just another ...

I'll admit, if this wasn't my summer reading book this past summer, I would have put it down after about a quarter of the way through. It was decent, but ...

A special thanks to everyone who reviewed (and a normal thanks for anyone who just took the time to read all the way through) Mad, I'm not sure how much ...

In the hollow of thine chest, Forgotten is the hatred of thine heart. In the hollow of thine chest, She no longer resides apart. ^The last line seemed too short/cut ...

Random note to self: hah, I should probably look up the form of a sonnet one of these days so I'll recognize the form when I come to one :D ...

Nice ~double meaning of prey/pray in the last line of the first stanza. The "and" of the first line of the second stanza seems unnecessary and makes the line sound ...