Leja

at least we know better now, right? 0_o And we're better people for it :D

In reply to above, here's a survey compilation: http://popvssoda.com:2998/ Here's a link to a USA todayarticle: And here's a page about American dialects in general (btw, #80 on the list ...

I wrote...*hides* MARY SUE FANFICTION! Oh god the PAIN. I'm embarrassed to even admit it.... If it weren't for it, I never would've gotten better! (Just don't ask me to ...

I think "fuzz" disappeared after the fifties or so (think The Outsiders; I think that's the only place I've ever heard it used seriously) I think soda is more east ...

Amelia is amused by Claire's hobbit jig, if Claire still remembers doing it, as it seems to have occured a while ago.

so, so morbid...yet despite that, rather good. Personally, I'd get rid of "these" in the very last line; I think it's unnecessary, but that's just me. These lines seem... weird, ...

The girl of his dreams smelled like fruit, but did she taste like it too? She came over for a drink, and he started to cook some stew. It's this ...

Hey, haven't seen you around for a while. I felt like there should have been a little more connection emotionally with the people in the poem. It made me (for ...

I really, really want to make an intelligent comment here, but I have little idea as to what to say (no, please do not put me in one of Ofour's ...

"I mean right now; This day, this minute, this second. I mean forever and always" This seems like a contradiction. Do you mean that you love said soul mate just ...

It does seem, as you said, something you wrote just to get it off your chest. But despite that, there were nice images and I liked it. No, by the ...

I thought this had a pleasent rhythem to it. Cute and lilting, just like the rest of the poem. A few places where I thought it was off, however: "You ...

I wish I could play piano like that ^_^ 10/10

First off, try posting a little more, especially for a whole chapter. Otherwise, it is rather difficult to critique. I believe I read somewhere that around 1000 words seemed standard ...

The first thing that caught my attention was that so many sentences begin with "She [insert verb here]", which can get a little tired after a while, especially in something ...