Leja

You really don't need all that stuff at the beginning. Maybe a brief comment about the grammar thing, but I was so bored by the end, I almost didn't read ...

So so pretty! The flowers look a little pale in the second one? The duck is a little small in the fourth one; I don't really like the bush on ...

phew! That's finally cleared up! :D I've been wondering myself about the differences of addictive/addicting for a while.

The room didn’t even present the option of spoons, with signs like “No Food or Drink,” and the receptionist behind her desk who looked like she was pensively chewing gum ...

Wow. Gorgeous pictures the both of them. The first one is cool because it almost seems like the fish are floating midair. But I must say, I love the second ...

For so many words, I didn't catch a whole lot being said. The last two lines were drifting towards somthing interesting, but what leads up to them was a little ...

I like the style, but it was a little too... intense... for me to read all at once. Too bad you didn't post them in different threads, or it would ...

is my poem, if anyone feels like reading it [and I hope someone does][/url]

Phew. That first sentence was long. I'd suggest taking out some wordiness: "When I saw her, sitting on a bench close to the cafe I was currently sitting in [ ...

1) Can't stand Hatchet by... okay, I don't even remember who it's by. I just know that it dragged on for too long. You know what? Second this feeling for ...

You repeated the idea of loneliness, and you should use your 17 syllabals to expand on something rather than say the same thing twice. Also, adding some punctuation would be ...

All the magic stuff in one place... it's kinda cool. 8/10

too bad. writing down dreams is useful 7/10

I like the style of the bubbles. And the green/blueness. He just looks very elongated in the first one.

Grey's Anatomy, Law and Order, Gilmore Girls, and The O.C.